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Chrys for short because her name is really long and I can't pronounce it....

woo! another oc! because one can never have enough ocs!

ok so I'll been wanting a oc with pink hair for a really long time, I just like pink hair ok. she was going to be a pirate but she doesn't really look like one now.

She was supposed to be a lot older but she looks kind of young, and kind of like a hafling or something

The pose on the left..... I don't even know....
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Left:
Your dynamic posing needs some work. I suggest using some 3D models, and then emphasizing them anime style :D
I like what you did with the feet, very dynamic and would be nice to look at, though it doesn't seem as properly oriented in both direction of force and weight of the character.
She kinda looks like she's tiled/leaning/floating? Also, the 3D aspect of the picture, the raised arms toward the audience, should be larger and should vary in the degree of tilt and the incline of said 3D-ism. It depends on how close/far said body part is from the camera/POV.
The 3D tilt of the blade should also be taken into account, since it should lie at an agle if she were holding it in that position. Her right arm also holding the blade looks short, rather than looking like it's coming toward the viewer.

Right:
I love the picture on the right, though through my personal inclinations, I would like to see her right breast slightly lower, because when you take account the armpit, it's fine on her left arm, though on her right arm, her breastline make it look like her armpit is where her collarbone would lead to. The corset to be more rounded? The boots look fantastic.

Both
For both, I would suggest finding slightly more fitting proportions, as in on the right, her torso could be toned down in width, along with her neck, and her head size, and that the head could stand to be a little lower, i.e. reducing the length of her neck.

Otherwise, I like the style as compared to your previous art! I love seeing people actually try something outside of their comfort zone. I as well am learning to draw more 3D-ish? anime, with dynamic posing and action as compared to stagnant sitting or standing.

Notes:
I love the shoulderless concept, always been a fan of shoulderless clothing.

Still am jelly of your coloring :3 I can't even color so simply yet effectively like this picture x)

Oh, btw, I have a kinda nice picture I wanted colored nicely, do you think you could do it?